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I can't believe,
It's been a year,
Since that tragic day.
The day we had,
To say goodbye.
Goodbye to love,
And friendship.
You left us here,
In liquid pain,
Feeling forgotten.
And it's Like the,
world Was crumbling,
Beneath us.
And leaving us,
Numb in the dark.
Because the light,
Was gone.
The laughter had,
Died.
You had died,
And even,
A year later,
It makes us ache,
Knowing you're,
Gone.
We miss you,
Everyday that goes,
By.
Time may pass,
But our love,
For you,
Will never fade.
- by ThoughtlessPoet |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2009 |
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- Title: A Year
- Artist: ThoughtlessPoet
- Description: I really miss my cousin.. Constantly to be honest she was my best friend.
- Date: 07/17/2009
- Tags: year death gone
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Gylfie531 - 07/20/2009
- this is very good. the breaks in the sentences are a little off, and there are some unneccessary capitalizations. also the rhythm is not constant. you broke up each sentence in a different number of lines, which made the poem a bit awkward to read. but still 4/5.
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- Senpai Darling - 07/17/2009
- Very melancholy. 5/5
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- XlaceyXunbrokenX - 07/17/2009
- Thats beautiful and depressing at the same time, it really is.
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