Alice in wonderland (poem)

• Artist: kawaiigore
• Description: not copying any of the things from the book!!!!!!!!!! i didn't steal it or claim to own rights to Alice's adventures in wonderland, Alice in wonderland, or through the looking glass
• Date: 07/19/2009
• Tags: lost soul

I dropped in to a land one day
a land of crazy and mysterious things
a Rabbit i must chaise
with gloves and a pocket watch
tiny bottles with strange labeling
must taste for poisoning
but everything keeps getting smaller
OH dear a tea cake
i must taste it looks to good
oh no now every thing is getting bigger
now what is this crazy hatter doing??!!!!!!!
and a, another rabbit?!
a mouse to!
well i can't be rude i must sit for tea
oh my its my unbirthday today, well fancy that!!!
dear lord i am quite tired of this charade
whats this a talking smile?
OH DEAR ITS A CAT A SMILING, LAUGHING, CAT!
and whats that its saying
oh no their ALL mad down here
of course!
and now a lovely babe
oh my no i was wrong a pig!
thw queen of hearts wants to play,
OFF WITH MY HEAD? oh dear , oh dear
it was all a dream?

Comments

[kawaiigore]

not all poems rhyme!!!! i cant rhyme worth a damn so i don't :3

[13SHADY13BST13]

no many rhyme's but it's good!

[kawaiigore]

oi give me a break, i am dislexic, biggrin , but thanxs

[maydaymouse]

You should fix the grammar and spelling errors, other then that it was a good poem. So I give it a 4/5.

[kawaiigore]

KEEP COMMENTS COMING I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE IT!!!!!! biggrin