This Love is Silent

• Artist: -[[Yreka!]]-
• Description: I have no idea why I came up with this. It just popped up into my head during a creative writing club meeting, but it was just so perfect for my situation at the time.~
• Date: 07/20/2009
• Tags: love silent

This love is silent.
Silent, as in shouting.
Shouting, as in speaking.
Speaking to the silence,
And thinking, what is this?
Why do I hold this pillow so,
As it were to be someone, smiling,
Smiling to the darkness which holds me in its arms,
Depriving me of the horrid light,
Leaving me in the starry night.

Comments

[xXx Lexi Beach Girl xXx]

good description, but it's too short. i recommend spending your time making it longer. see mine's for an example

i rate it a 2 btw but it's actually pretty good just too short