No longer needing you.

• Artist: aya Fujimiya_Omi Takatori
• Description: just something i thought of while doing a re-cap of a very unmissed situation.
• Date: 07/22/2009
• Tags: longer needing myself blame

I told you how I felt,
You said you felt the same,
I’m sorry I believed you,
I’ve only myself to blame.

All the pain I’ve kept inside,
Could so easily not have been here,
If only I’d not been naive,
I wouldn’t have shed a tear.

You’ve faked every hug,
Kind gesture &smile,
Not wanting ME all of the while.

You’ve always acted sincerely,
And I’ve almost quite nearly,
Believed every “sweet lie” you’ve told.

You always seemed so perfect. And
When with me you said you did love me,
When away told how you’re quite “above me”
Although you made sure I’d never hear of it.
You see now I have and I must laugh,
At the thought of being any less than YOU.

You’re not worth it,
The pain you’ve caused me.
It is true, and I now see,
I just wish I could’ve sooner,
Then you couldn’t have hurt me.

Now that I see,
That it was you and not me,
That was the source of my pain,
I am able to let go, it’s true
So I am no longer needing you.

Comments

[aya Fujimiya_Omi Takatori]

I am going over all of my poems and what not from two-ish years ago... and I have to say, the person that gave me a four was Very generous. I just went over this and I would not have even rated Myself that highly. Though I am harder on myself than most. This one just did not flow... at all.

[Sylve]

I didn't know you liked to write beautiful. I get what you're talking bout too.

[sweetiechicklover22]

wow its amazing good job

[Flaming Tsunami]

I feel that this topic is slightly overused, though this isn't your fault. It shows how much things like this happen. Now with that out of the way, I give you a three and a half, which rounds up to a four. It seemed to ramble a bit at times, and the lines sort of became jumbled in what seemed like haste; it caused it to lose some of the meaning. Over all though, it was good.