Something that is not real.

• Artist: Wunderful_Coffee_Cup
• Description: i just thought of it tell me watcha think
• Date: 07/26/2009
• Tags: something real

I want to cry,
I want to feel,
Something that is not real,
You remind me of the times,
I lay awake way past nine,
I was thinkin of your blindin' beauty,
You made me feel,
Something that is not real,
But now,
I think I hate you,
But I know,
I still need you,
And I hope you still do to,
I have cried to many tears,
All of your teasing jeers,
Each like a lash,
I will turn you into ash,
We made the same mistakes,
Like we always do,
I want to cry,
I want to feel,
Something that is not real.
This feeling we call "love",
Is it real?
Or just a infuation,
With you.
I cry,
I feel,
Something that is now not real.

Comments

[BlingKitten]

It's a little forced in some places, come back to it in a month or so and I bet you'll be able to revise it and make it better

[Valoralin]

I like it ^-^

[deathbringer xshuyinx]

its good