Girl I Once Knew

• Artist: Lone S. Wolf
• Description: So. . .I decided to try to once again take a stab at the world of poetry seeing as my two other entries got good reviews. . . enjoy. ^^
  
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• Date: 08/05/2009
• Tags: girl once knew

My heart cries
For the girl I once knew
Whose smile
Lit up my world.

Who calms the tears
The fears
That swallows this heart of mine
When I'm just not strong enough

She can make me laugh
With such abandon
That just a smile
Makes me forget

For a little while

I remember. . .
Everything

Her warmth
Her light
Her own self worth


What happened to the girl I once knew?

Who's smile
Who's laugh
Who's words

Are falling on deaf ears
And very heavy hearts

Because if it were up to me,
I would pay whatever price
To bring her back
And be the girl that I once knew

Comments

[Science Fantasy]

Very beautiful... just watch out for some grammar errors... "Whose smile," rather than "who's smile." That makes me deduct a point, but still 4/5. n_n

[Atomic Rock]

Very nice. I can tell it was from the heart.

[ElementalDragonBlue]

This poem is remind me of someone I loss. I love they way u wrote from the heart. Would it bother u if I read this poem at her funeral and I will cite who the artist was. Thank you for writing I can't wait to read your next one.