-
Gently swirling with unbroken passion
Or crashing down with fierce love
Strong as a fire and smoldering ashes
Or with the tenderness of a delicate dove
- by Estarine Zephaloid |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/12/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: A Sea of Kisses
- Artist: Estarine Zephaloid
- Description: finally my 3rd poem and just for the comments - I appreciate comments on how to impove and your opinion on it, but please don't be rude or mean.
- Date: 08/12/2009
- Tags: love metaphors ocean
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- CatBugBus - 12/25/2009
- I wish i had your mind. You have written the most unique, beautiful poetry i have ever read in my entire life.
- Report As Spam
- SakuraHaruno5121 - 08/17/2009
- cool. 5/5 ^.^
- Report As Spam
- Silver Dragonrider93 - 08/14/2009
- its short. but its also down to the point. nice job.
- Report As Spam
- swimmer0416 - 08/12/2009
- I really like it. Its a sweet peom.
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
