Abuse

• Artist: XX_vAmPiRe_MiMe_XX
• Description: One of my bestest friends was abused and it was awful. She was very sad and she wanted to just disappear. She was frightened after she told me about it and she was scared. I reassured her that the pain would stop and she's okay now because i got some help for her and now all is well. I wrote this poem for her so she could have hope again and this is how i thought she felt like during the unfourtunate situation. so here is my short poem for you guys to read. Please comment and rate thank you.
• Date: 08/12/2009
• Tags: abuse sadness hope depression

Abuse


Watching
Waiting
Is he coming?
I wish i could,
I wish i would
Escape
Drenched in
My own pain
No one
To save me
I'm crying
I'm dying
I'm on my knees
For the final toll
The last strike
There is no love
Just pain,
Depression
No hope
No life
Just pain and hurt
Let me die

Comments

[NelystheAlchemyst]

i can relate to this

[LynSayzWTF]

My friend was Abused... But now she's dead cause her dad killed her... cry

[Su_chan93]

very very good i have another account Meepa_chan_is_a_MW look up my poem love in a confused child and these walls of mine...i know what shes going through...

[sk8er nickc]

nice poem, i can relate to it alot since i was abused myself

[xL E E S U H so s r s]

the poem i have up is somewhat about abuse. and.. love? lol it's just how twisted i am. it's confusing. but this, this is simple. it's actually very good. and it is most likey how she felt. in my expierience most victems feel this way >_< <333

[XX_vAmPiRe_MiMe_XX]

srry i couldn't fit this in the description but this is a free write poem its not really suppose to have a rhythem but thanks for the comments!! biggrin

[Akira242]

That is really good! And I'm so sorry about your friend... You are a good friend to get her help! 5/5