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His love had been taken away,
Never shall he forget that day.
His heart has ceased it's contant beat,
His soul is no longer complete.
Several years of devontion to her,
Now only a emotional blur.
The tears flow from his constant crying,
His lover was taken and now he's dying.
He removes the ring she gave him, to peek at,
He sees her initials, then cries where he's at.
This man had lost his beloved counterpart,
Which left an enormous void in his heart.
He cries out her name day and night,
Hoping someone would hear his plight.
But no one cares about his tears,
Tears that will for years and years.
He knows that she will forever be gone,
But his love for her will always live on.
- by Muahahaha92 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/13/2009 |
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- Title: Taken Love
- Artist: Muahahaha92
- Description: I'd Rather not Explain this one.
- Date: 08/13/2009
- Tags: taken love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 09/19/2009
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A male that has lost his love and feels remorse for it. I usually see bitterness in this sort of idea and I see more melancholy in this perspective.
BUT the unforgivable grammatical mistakes are something to look over. I know that you can't fix them after hitting submit but try harder to be a little more error free. - Report As Spam
- NeoBurley - 08/16/2009
- ok great rytming ok BUT the IT rtyme line needs to be change and would be one of the best rtyme usage i seen on this today when i been posting comments ok -NEo
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- x_T i f f y y L o v e - 08/13/2009
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Oyy Who Hurt yew..?
Assholes - Report As Spam
- IgoRawrslol - 08/13/2009
- i feel your pain on this one
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