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Run-On Sentence*
This poem is written using columns. Read down the left-hand column first, then continue by reading down the right-hand column.
Sometimes failure is the_____never weeded, all runs amiss,
best way to go, because_____discord gives the world her kiss,
maybe we really don’t_______we give reign to chaos, because
know what’s best for_______nothing else can save us, recklessness
the rest of us, even_______goes unpunished, unregarded, secrets
though we may_________are told, left unguarded , impunity takes
think we’re on to_________over, becomes our king, nevermore
something big, life’s________does freedom ring, the uneducated
a game that’s rigged,________masses flood in and there’s no
sometimes you win,__________atonement, just sin, understand nothing,
sometimes you lose, and________for understanding has
no matter which path you_________fled, reasoning and logic
choose they all lead to the_________pronounced dead, easy to
exact same end, enemies___________start, never to end, holding
become friends and versa____________your heart out to a friend,
vice, et cetera, et cetera,____________darkness shall conquer and
things change, they_______________closets shall open, the monsters
rearrange, nothing_______________will come, locks will be broken,
is the onlly thing__________________insanity runs wild, child bearing
that moves, we all___________________child bearing beast, wickedness’
fall through the grooves________________feast, rapists go unapprehended,
and fade away, none_____________________rips in souls go unmended,
us are really here to stay,____________________murder gives way to suicide
they say our voices are heard__________________gives way to matricide
but that’s absurd, our cries_____________________gives way to filicide gives
fall on deaf ears, they don’t_____________________way to genocide, end of
see, they don’t hear, the______________________nations, civilizations, back
world falls apart, the_______________________to the primordeal ooze, high
unraveling starts, and_____________________on crack, drunk on booze, the
goes on and on_____________________prostitution hits all-time high, no one
and on, unnoticed,______________________thinks to ask why, if this is life in
unheeded, like a garden____________a nutshell, maybe we should try to fail.
- by chirpysmom |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/26/2009 |
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- Title: Run-On Sentence
- Artist: chirpysmom
- Description: This is a poem I don't remember writing, but I think I was a sophomore in high school. It's a semi-concrete poem, and is supposed to look like a widening crack, representing society's inevitable plunge into the abyss. It's not really a happy poem. Hope you like it. Please comment.
- Date: 08/26/2009
- Tags: runon sentence
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Aylute - 09/11/2009
- What a cool idea, making the first part seem like we can get over it and then abruptly changing the society into something everyone fears. I really liked it!
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- Creedo Nyuga - 08/30/2009
- i loved it smile
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- futurekingofgames - 08/30/2009
- excellent, this one is defintly a keeper and gaia should add this as one of those awesomeness ones
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- Ninja Mileena - 08/29/2009
- i thought it was super special awesome
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- Poetic Progression - 08/26/2009
- Awesomeness. No better word.
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- lucyduke17 - 08/26/2009
- it makes such sense. not everyone can write like this. you actually are an inspiration and you make me feel little as to the greatness when i try to write.
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