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Death by Rain,
Death by Soul,
Dead with Pain,
Dead with Coal.
Rain sleeps all day,
Sneaks up at night,
To where you lay,
Bloody dagger in sight.
She kills you there,
She's not very humane,
She doesn't care,
Because she's Insane.
Soul walks by light,
But as soon as darkness falls,
She is a watcher by night,
You will never hear her calls.
She creeps up on you,
She isn't much of a talker,
But you will know too,
That she is truely a Stalker.
Pain can be so sweet,
But you better watch your back,
He may seem like a treat,
But then he will attack.
He loves to see blood spilled,
He will not be a flirterer,
Because you are now killed,
He is a mastermind Murderer.
Coal slips around in silence,
He watches with care,
Then he uses harsh voilence,
And his temper will flare.
He locks you away,
He will use courture,
He will create pain in your day,
For he is a genius at Torture.
- by Insane The Idiot |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/28/2009 |
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- Title: Ghosts of Death
- Artist: Insane The Idiot
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Description:
A simple poem involving four ghosts, that live to kill, or should I say, died to kill. I used this poem as the beginning of a new roleplay I made, called "Alive Today, Dead Tomarrow." if you want to join, here is the URL:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/barton-town/alive-today-dead-tomarrow-open-and-accepting/t.53821229/
i know i used the word "flirterer", but as soon as i find a different word that fits ill fix it - Date: 08/28/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Delilah Daisy Summers - 09/03/2009
- I think ur wordplay was excellent!
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- DeiDei12345 - 08/30/2009
- I love it. Its beautiful in a way thats completely different then others; but in some ways you really don't want to be able to relate to it.
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- Feysera - 08/29/2009
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Amazing. Really good. I would suggest instead of using "fliterer" say something like:
"He will not be a flirter
He's a mastermind of/at/in murder"
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- Yandere Neko - 08/28/2009
- I am really liking the concept. You have a good style too. :3 Nice job
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