the darkness grows

• Artist: drake keldon
• Description:
• Date: 08/28/2009
• Tags: darkness grows

Light as day,
Dark as night,
Even in the darkest night,
a faded light,
within the night,
a broken light,
which once shown bright,
a lost soul,
with a deadened sense,
oblivious to that around him,
a lost hope,
an unheard prayer,
the lost soul wanders,
filled with despair,
the darkest night,
a deadened light,
the glow,
of a deadened hope,
a now dead soul,
the darkness grows.

Comments

[fruit4you]

It was good, but waaay to many repeated words. I understand repetition, but you used light and night too much."Light as day,
Dark as night,
Even in the darkest night,
a faded light,
within the night,
a broken light"

[thatoneguyfromthatonetime]

Sooo...dark.