In the darkness

• Artist: wolfgrl12
• Description: well idk i got real sad and wrote this and its jus one of them weird emo sad things
• Date: 09/05/2009
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As she stands there in the darkness
No one sees........the fear, the regret in her eyes.
No one hears.......her silent cries.
No one cares.......about her pleads, her needs.
She needs to run away. She cannot stay.
She must flee.
She must be free.
Yes, she must be free.

Comments

[firefox228]

i really like this. it speaks to the reader (:

[grim-knuckles]

Hey, I really love how depressing this poem is, and even if it's not about being depressed, I still love it.

[Mev2013]

i wish we all never had to go through things like that ya know? it's just lonely and sad.. Well i really liked your poem smile 5/5

[iiCooffins]

very nice 5/5