what shall i do!!

• Artist: xX_emo girl18_Xx
• Description: hi my freinds this poem i edited it again plz say ur openion about it thx ^^
• Date: 09/18/2009
• Tags: whatshallido

what shall i do?
full of pain
full of hurt
no one fells me

what shall i do?
all the people telling me
they love me
but is this true?
or they are lying
they are pretending and showing alot of face
why?

what shall i do?
all the world coming black
all the world turning to hell
and...
im asking for help
but no one replys me
and noone is here
noone hears my calling
like all the people become deaf

what shall i do?
im stuck in this black dark world alone
alone stuck in this darkness
full of fears and pain

what shall i do?
im searching for places no....
no pain no hurt no tears no darkness
searching for aome one to pull me out of this hell
all the people seemed not caring for me anymore

what shall i do?
now im nth
now nth in my hands
just watching my tears falling down from my eyes
and im waiting to die
im now the angel of hell

Comments

[Th3 PrInCeEsS]

i am now and you leaving me proves so thank you anyway...

[lovedoeslast]

hugs her close u r not alone do not be afraid, btw nicely written.5/5

[xX_emo girl18_Xx]

thank you all ^^

[puppylove600]

Excellent smile 5/5

[290DarkStars]

no comment. its good 4/5.

[sweetstrawberrypiece]

great!!!!!!!!! 5/5

[ll broken_emo ll]

sis its really good i love evry thing u do