Waiting

• Artist: Faifey
• Description:
• Date: 09/27/2009
• Tags: waiting

I do not know,
For what exactly I am waiting for.
Lost in time,
Eternity's hour.
Is it wasting away?
The warmth of life,
Is it going astray?

I do not know,
For what exactly, I stop for.
Frozen in time,
Shattered Glass,
Falling snow,
The painted picture.

I do not know,
For what exactily I am running from.
Perhaps for freedom,
Perhaps from Fear;
I have ran for so long,
The airy breeze dries my tears.
I have ran so long,
The chatter and noise grows seldom.

I cannot hear, I cannot speak, I cannot see,
I cannot touch, I cannot smell.

I cannot breathe.

Comments

[Faifey]

I didn't realize I was writting in such a way. I don't read emo. But thankx in believeing in potential.

[Cocoskitten]

The phrases in your first and second stanzas are seriously overused by emo poets in histrionics. Don't mimic their patheticness.
I really believe there is potential in your and your writing. Be original.