Draw me away Love

• Artist: Nathan Oukami
• Description: This is a poem about love. It's short, sweet, to the point, and can even be sung! Enjoy!
• Date: 10/06/2009
• Tags: draw away love

Draw me dear Love,
Draw me today;
From everything else, Dear Love;
Draw me away,

O Love, this whole world
seems to weigh me down;
all the cares the strife the sin,
within me and all around.

But Love, I want to set my heart,
And Love I want to stay with You;
Cause only when You're near to me,
Is everything okay.

And though everything may fall apart;
Or everything go my way,
It doesn't really matter, Love
As long as I gain You, today!

Comments

[serketcity]

It's neat! The meter is good enough for it to be sung, and I like the blank verse a lot. It could use a little work on the rhyme scheme, if you want it to rhyme, and there are a few extra syllables here and there, but overall very well done!