asylum (haiku)

• Artist: Pandaonholiday
• Description: This is a three stanza haiku about being in an asylum (no i dont know what its like xD) for those who aren't farmiliar with the poem type a haiku is a 5 syllable line then a 7 syllable then another 5 in each stanza(paragraph) please enjoy and rate as you see fit =3 thanks ~ oxkxw
• Date: 10/09/2009
• Tags: asylum haiku

Last night i snapped
So i sit in this white room
I wish I could leave

I blame this on you
I have to wait to see you
So I can kill you


I have to sit here,
feeling close to insanity
I do belong here.

Comments

[h00drat64]

First haiku I liked. Second haiku was dreadful. The "you" at every end of every line really threw me off. The third haiku was ehh. Overall 2/5.