Night

• Artist: Katsody
• Description: Wrote it on the spot for a thread in The Writing on the Wall. The topic was "night."
• Date: 10/20/2009
• Tags: night writing alone light darkness

Night

It falls
and I rise
stronger and renewed
hidden in the shadows
as I hide from the light
It falls
and I rise
joyous and alive
clinging to the feeling
when I usually push away
It falls
and I rise
desperate yet calm
heart racing wildly
blood coursing through me
It falls
and I rise
feral and unhindered
fearing no consequence
where consequence should mean most
It falls
and I rise
careless and free
running through this playground
only eight hours deep
It falls
and I rise
satisfied yet somber
savoring the darkness
before the light comes again
It rises
and I fall
frustrated and alone
slipping on the mask
only moonlight can thaw

Comments

[Xx_Dazed_Daydreamer_xX]

really good. I thought it had nice description, and it put a lot of good imagery in my mind. 5/5

[insert_name_here_3]

I think that's really good for on the spot writing. Over all its pretty and puts in good images in my head 4/5