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Reborn...
as a new person
no more pretending
I'm something I'm not
Today is the day
I breath again...
Breath in a new scent
Start over as something new
Live without worry...
Right?
But can someone live....
With no yesterday?
Am I really a new person
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or just a new me.
Can I really tell myself that I was reborn?
Can I really live without anyone to share it with?
Who am I really?
Is it really a new breath?
Or just a fresh old one?
What ever it is this time I'm living this life right.
- by CherryGoes_POP |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/05/2009 |
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- Title: Reborn
- Artist: CherryGoes_POP
- Description: This is something I wrote for a 100 theme challenge,the word was Breath Again.I hope you like it.I think it can speak to some people,but I'm just the silly writer that thinks all her poems are great.Lol.
- Date: 11/05/2009
- Tags: reborn breath again poem teen
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Comments (4 Comments)
- nikkitynikk - 12/09/2009
- I really do like your poetry.
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- CherryGoes_POP - 11/05/2009
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oh,my bad thanks for pointing that out
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- Ora the Owlish - 11/05/2009
- I like it. Thank you for not taking the concept and making it dark and emo. However, you do need to check line 7, and replace "sent" with "scent."
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- CherryGoes_POP - 11/05/2009
- Once Again,I take comments of ANY kind.Still my hopes are in the stars that you like it very much.XD
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