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snow falls at my feet
and melts with defeat
the winter makes everyone cold
when he was acting like winter
he could freeze a pond or two
the pain like a splinter
if only i knew
his songs would fill the room with happiness
and bring a bird half to death
would stop the wolfs from holwing long
and stun almost all the rest
his smile would burn one thousand suns
his eyes could kill a man
it used to be all games and fun
i tried to play if i can
my only pain is that one little splinter
His heart froze, during winter
- Title: Frozen Winter
- Artist: Zenyei
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- Date: 11/12/2009
- Tags: frozen winter
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Comments (1 Comments)
- ABluejay - 11/12/2009
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3 stars
1 for effort
1 for rhyme scheme
and one for a theme.
but you need to make just a lil more sense, or at least give us some info via the description - Report As Spam