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On this night I walk alone
Looking to the moon to soothe my sadness, looking to the stars to ease my pain
I feel a shiver run through my body as the wind blows filling my eyes with the tears I tried to restrain
And when they started to fall they wouldn't stop because they are the ANTIDOTE to the poison I been subjected to
Like being bit by a snake the pain of the venom running through my veins is unbearable, so I weep
To the broken heart and the many days and nights alone I cry
But as I look at my reflection I see a girl finally taking her true form as a woman, a girl who cries to show strength
So I lift my head high to look at the gifts the gods left me and I hear the wind whisper 1000 messages of truth to my soul, I smile
I smile just as Kratos is smiling down on me peircing me with the strength god gave me to survive in this world of war
So on this night I walk alone, looking to the moon to soothe my sorrow, looking to the stars to give me hope
- by Fancy Egypt |
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- | Submitted on 11/13/2009 |
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- Title: "On This Night"
- Artist: Fancy Egypt
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just a poem I wrote...enjoy!!
Kratos-the greek god of strength
Eros-the god of love and passion - Date: 11/13/2009
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- jellykans - 11/13/2009
- Please read this aloud...you have vivid images, the heart of a good poetic story, but they are so jumbled the reader's mental picture is chaotic. I think you will discover changes you want to make if you read it aloud.
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