I LoveYou. DPB

• Artist: xODdreamzZOx
• Description: It is a poem that I started writing about a guy, in school that I loved a lot.
• Date: 11/21/2009
• Tags: loveyou

I have something to admitt,
I have something to say,
these words mean more to me,
then the words that appear in the air,
by the miniscule beings that walk by me,
these words i want to say,
they are the words that explain for all,
the strange things happening in the world,
because tonight i just want to say that
i love you.
and everything is going to be okay.

I have something to reveal.
Something that needs to be unveiled.
Because those wishes and dreams
Are haunting me when i close my eyes.
Making me need you, ever more.

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Another yuppie love poem. I am sure you felt as if you were expressing yourself trly. Fine slab of teen drama, pal.

I see no common theme, nothing that makes me think, feel, or care. Just a simple, not complex, love poem.x 2/5.

[Spikerawrr]

Very awesome <3

[Ooharsis]

Beautiful.