Proposals and Betrayals

• Artist: BloodStainLoveStory
• Description: Yet another piece straight from my brain, not alot i can say for it, let me know how you interpret it. :) Thanks alot guys.
• Date: 12/29/2009
• Tags: proposals betrayals death love hate

Lifted straight from your mold you were the image of perfection
My eyes will never adjust to just how well made you are
Till now my heart had never settled to the one
But upon this noble heart struck a daggered tongue
No intention was placed upon the punctures in his arteries
To be or not to be is always the question and never will i be able to just be the one
I try and fail or fail to try and this will be my downfall
I love you like a flower loves the water
But this water has run dry and this flower has been pruned
Forgive me for the letters i write as i slowly fade to insecurity
My love i will be what you want but you will still never look upon me the same

Comments

[BloodStainLoveStory]

@ VvryukvV Insecurity is used here in terms of what he feels he is becoming to her, something she is insecure about.

[VvryukvV]

The poem shows insecurity so change insercurity to obsurity and wilted for the flower part. This will allow the peom to follow as if a a dream, a vision, whatever you wish to call it.

[LEATHERFACE8785]

nice 5/5

[0ne Republic]

thats really good 5/5

[flirtationship]

Yet another great poem, keep up the great work! <3 ^.^