Heartbreaker

• Artist: Dark Yet Pure
• Description: about a girl who loves the wrong one
• Date: 01/14/2010
• Tags: heart breaker sadness

She loves him secretly
clinging on to eternity
dreaming about him every night
he is the escape from her fright
he doesn't know anything
still going through stupid flings
not knowing how much she needs
not hearing her pleads
she is desperate
wanting something legit
she gave up on her dream
just to sew a seam of a memory of her part
into his shallow heart
and she clings on to fantasy
cause its her on escape from reality
she needs him there
and he doesn't care

Comments

[Lord Vassago]

Good Morning,
It's me again. You can tell alot of feeling and effort was put into this. The only real thing that bothered me was the line, "just to sew a seam of a memory of her part" felt kind of lengthy but that is just my opinion so don't take it to heart. Again, another well written piece have resulted in a 4.5/5 can't wait for more. Ttyl.