Alone

• Artist: SilverClan_Rainstar
• Description: I wrote this poem in a state of depression..? I guess you could say...? Anyway, I hope you like it better than my sister, who told me that my feelings sucked and that I should rip this up...
• Date: 02/16/2010
• Tags: alone

There’s no one here.
All Around
Me are dark echoes.
I’m all alone.

There are no sounds
But my beating heart
And hitched breathing.
I’m all alone.

I see nothing
In this black abyss,
Darkness consuming.
I’m all alone.

Nothing to touch
I’m falling forever.
I’m losing my grasp on who I am.
I’m all alone.

Why am I alone?
Why do I always end up like this?
I’m on the outside.
I belong nowhere.
I’m all alone.

Comments

[Scarlet_Teardrops]

Your sister is retarded.
First of all, the poem is written with proper punctuation and grammar. That's amazing!

This poem is powerful and contains a lot of emotion and feelings. I understand these feelings myself. Don't let the world get you down, okay?

I vote 4/5, but I'd give it 4.5.