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she told me that i needed to grow up
i said, stop talking about yourself
she wanted to hit me but instead she said, i don't know what
i saw in you and started to cry
or at least her eyes got red
the next day at school she looked through me
it was kind of dumb
her friends sneered
she left without a goodbye
the sweet sorry on my tongue just
rotted silently in my mouth
Comments (2 Comments)
- Scarlet_Teardrops - 04/06/2010
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Wow. This is quite a poem.
The poem seems a little jagged in the way it reads. However, I think that only adds to the effect and power of the poetry. Good work. - Report As Spam
- darkrose1219 - 03/14/2010
- deep. i like it 5/5
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