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Stale,
Two lovers' hands do meet,
Though falter once they're there.
Chill was the air,
Though kind was their love,
Warming them down to their cores;
Their bones and twigs and stardust elements.
Soft,
Their love wilted in the n**,
Froze in the freezing gloom,
Though it was sweet as wintry rose.
Sound was their love-make,
Though two hands tried to mess,
Gripping til white went flesh.
Silky,
Two lovers' hands had met,
Tears flowing free
Onto those dreamy digits
Which had faltered in the winter air.
Love was here, love was there,
But wilts like wintry rose.
- by burningphilistine |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/08/2010 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- nikkilicious13 - 04/15/2010
- Ah I a LUV it! It's so pretty.... But I think you mis-spelled "night" and it thought you meant "ni/t" lolz razz
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- GaryIraOak - 03/28/2010
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Do worry we all do that or alest I know I did
I loved your poem it was sad yet sweet and beautiful too!
I loved reading it, ti was great! - Report As Spam
- burningphilistine - 03/09/2010
- I'm so horrible, I rated my own piece. Oh, I am bad.
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