Stagnant Breeze

• Artist: Kigaru_ECP
• Description: This poem is really depressing... it's about giving up on your dreams, whatever they may be. it's one of my first poems, so let me know what i need to work on
• Date: 03/09/2010
• Tags: stagnant breeze

Within my Frozen Heart blows a Stagnant Breeze

That softly caresses my hidden dreams

It kindles my desires and foolish hopes

Promising a tomorrow where I'm free of these Eternal Ropes

Leave me be Stagnant Breeze

Let my Frozen Heart freeze

Allow my dieing dreams to sink and bleed

For I know where my desires lead

I understand so leave me be

I'll close my dripping eyes and pretend not to see

The Beckoning Brightness before me

Intensely willing me to be free

Because I know even if i scream and strain

Stubbornly struggle until I'm filled with pain

That the Beckoning Brightness still beautifully ablaze

Will forever linger just out of a fingers graze

So leave me here Stagnant Breeze

And give this compliant coward tht ability to appease

Comments

[King of Trash]

beautifully dark. So deliciously depressing. 5/5. this is going in my favs.