Breathe

• Artist: naitofang 010525363949
• Description: just a poem i made when i was bored one day that turned out really awesome...
• Date: 03/17/2010
• Tags: night breathe dark

It surronds, suffocates
leaves you gasping for breath
life is a dark room
that makes you pray for death

The walls close in
the monsters come out
nothing can live
invisible drought

But then you came
and you brought a new light
you vanquished my pain
and gave me my sight

I trusted you completely
you never loved me at all
you took back your light
and watched me fall

It surronds, suffocates
and it just won`t leave
You can`t fight it
you can only breathe

Comments

[Intrepid Retreat]

-the universe has a cause

They have bound us all unto the machine of chains with their silly arguement. Attempted to snair the entire universe and chain it to cause shackling creative energy and free flow. Shackle. Shackle what is there to shackle too, but pain thorns papercuts paper chains

its sad not loving our own stories but attributing them all to the why is feeding the thorn. GOds mad, but he's playing his own mantra of importance and suffering. He chained himself to us.

[Intrepid Retreat]

1. The cosmological arguement is bogus
every infinite and contingent thing has a cause
a casual loop cannot exist
a casual chain cannot be infinite
a first cause must exist
-whatever begins to exist has a cause
-the universe began to exist
-the universe has a cause

[JacKiin a Parad0x]

For portraying love as light. 5/5 because great minds think alike

[capaqua]

your right, it did turn out awesome5/5