~~Alone~~

• Artist: i-cookie-monster8
• Description: i wrote this when i was depressed and hating the feeling i get when im at my house wishing i was somewhere else but knowing theres no place for me.
  i know this is short and i'm trying to add more i love poems but the truth is im no good at writing. Comment and tell me what ya think :)
• Date: 03/20/2010
• Tags: alone

The more I kick the more I fight,
the longer I spend alone tonight,
locked up in this room tied up tight,
no one to help me alone I fight,
waiting to see heaven’s light.

Comments

[Everly001]

Nice

[angelic_miller]

i think this is pretty good! note: not all poems have to rhyme... in case u didn't know... hope u keep writing... btw, i write poems too! omst of mine don't rhyme! 5/5