Flowers

• Artist: BLU3 R053
• Description: a haiku i made i had nothing else 2 do *cough* made it at school.
• Date: 04/03/2010
• Tags: flowers

Relaxing flowers
Soothing my eye's with beauty
Calming as i go.

Comments

[Stryker Dimentia]

It was fine until I got to "sucks right? well u tell me" - That line just doesn't fit man... I mean... Its good otherwise... just tweak that line and its golden.
3/5