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Thought
How is it that, with everyone else,
I think before I speak--
I am so serious and tactful with them,
and yet, with her,
I feel as carefree as ever?
Like I could say anything,
except those most simple and basic expressions of my feelings for her?
What keeps me from saying anything serious?
Why can't I say that which I want to say,
.....nay, what I NEED to say,
.......... that which is practically bursting from me,
especially when I know she probably feels the same way,
even if it's just a little bit?
And then the second I might have said it,
My foolish, wicked thoughts betrayed me,
and steered the conversation astray...
I'm such an idiot!
...
Maybe I'm reading too much into this;
She couldn't feel the same way as I!
Who would, about me?
I just need to sleep, that's it!
or maybe if I could just hear her voice again....
Oh God, I'm a wreck when I think too much!
- Title: Thought
- Artist: RG_tm
- Description: A free-verse poem dreamt up in the endless thoughts that go through one's mind at 2 in the morning... hope it's not complete garbage; it's my first attempt at poetry. Rate and critique honestly, and thank you!
- Date: 04/16/2010
- Tags: thought love confusion sleep
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