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The sun washes the evening tide,
the waves cascade over the sandy shores,
shrieks of laughter come aboard,
like the sweet tinkling of music,
smiling out,
its like a never ending circle,
of happiness,
glimpse of the shadows,
threaten the light,
till the laughter is no more,
and the quiet tides,
takes over there turf,
of the moonlit hazen.
- by MelroseHime3316 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/22/2010 |
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- Title: Moonlit
- Artist: MelroseHime3316
- Description: i was bored so i made this up, hope u enjoy
- Date: 04/22/2010
- Tags: moonlit
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Echo Ligeia - 05/01/2010
- Wow, very nice. You put me in suspense there at the end; I asked myself, "What's going to happen?" ^.^ Your use of diction is very suitable to the image you created, but I do wonder, what does "hazen" mean? Could you pm me? I can't find the definition, and now I can't forget it. XP
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