Pit of Pity

• Artist: Electra Dominates
• Description: This is a poem i wrote about a guy trying to get a girl back after a breakup.
• Date: 04/23/2010
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Pit of Pity

Wallowing in self hatred
Your time has come
So long your ambitions have waited
The hole you will be taken from
Never the less a cost must be paid
your rights and wrongs must now be weighed
Rise into your judgment day
hope her heart will let you stay
If not, tumbling down you will fall
not able to climb the cold, wet wall
alone again in the pit
for all eternity you will sit

Comments

[HorsemanOfAlchemy]

wow. this is a great poem. this is better than any of the others here in the Poetry arena. sadly, i've seen this kind of thing happen alot to both my guy friends and girls.
This poem really shows what the feeling is when somebody want somebody back.