Hawaii

• Artist: xshatteredxbrilliancex
• Description: This was a project for my grade 9 English class. We had to use different forms of writing (similes, metaphor etc) . I decided to write mine based on the memory of my trip to Hawaii.
• Date: 04/28/2010
• Tags: hawaii

You’re in a different place,
Seeing different things,
Feeling different ways

Dig your toes into the sand,
It feels like you’re in another world

Standing there, the wind rushes through your hair
The smell of salt surrounding you

The weather is humid and shows no sympathy
For the people living on the streets

The water is always comfortingly warm
Like cocoa on a cold winters night

Look over the mountains, then the ocean
The weather is different like night and day

Hear the thunder roaring down the mountains
A bright, dark sensation runs through you

Look over the mountains and see the lights from the ship,
Like candles covering chocolate-caramel cake

All year round, a.m./p.m. doesn’t seem to matter
The essence of the city only comes out at night.

Comments

[Uyu Cha]

Hope you come back biggrin

[Country Rain]

It's really cute and it's good too. :] 5/5