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I was crushed, over and over
Cut so many times
I bled over the cliffs of dover
And became silent as a mime
I was dead, barren, forsaken, and forgotten
I was on the edge
then I found you and was besotted
You pulled me from the ledge
My heart was in so much pain
Broken into fragments
By all the love that left me, again and again
Hurt so so many times it doth make no sense
If were not for you
My heart would have turned cold
But you kept back the cold
With the kindness you showed
But then you scorned me
Making me bitter and blue
you were just like the other
Yes, now I see that its true
It makes me wonder with the innocence of a child
When Im wringing your neck
How your screaming will sound
But you wont make a peep
be despaired and weep
you'll only make hums and muffles
ill put u forever to sleep
to fertilize the truffles
Now you may say that im mad or im crazed
That im loony or insane
Maybe off my rocker
When you meet old john knocker
with eyes that are glazed
but why call me loony when im actually quite sane?
i am but a man who likes to kill, you understand
Call me a killer
and you might be my next chiller
im a murderer no less no less
fast i prefer
But slow would be best
it makes nor a burden or a bother to me
I just want to hear u scream
your death rattle
Drowned out by the prattle
of an old man
With death on his hands.
THE END.
FIN.
- by OldJohnKnocker |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/04/2010 |
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- Title: Old John Knocker
- Artist: OldJohnKnocker
- Description: Hi, I am 15 years old so please don't be too harsh with me. I usually write love stuff you can check out my gallery but This time i decided to try something a little more...grim. ENJOY
- Date: 05/04/2010
- Tags: john knocker
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Comments (1 Comments)
- SilvertongueSagittarius - 05/04/2010
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Some of your lines feel like they were fabricated just to fit the rhyme. Try to avoid that. It's a good poem though.
(btw, dont add a disclaimer like that. It makes people respect you less. Besides, I wrote one of my masterpieces when I was 14) - Report As Spam