Fool

• Artist: Magical Marijuana Faerie
• Description: Blah, blah, blah. She hurt me so bad but I just can't stop loving her.
• Date: 05/05/2010
• Tags: fool

I'm a fool for feeling this way,
I'm a fool for stilling loving you,
I'm a fool for holding on to you,
A fool for wishing you'll fix things,
And that they could be normal.

You hurt me worse than anyone,
But I want so bad to come back,
I long for everything, your touch,
Your kiss, your whisper, your voice,
I long for those moments again,
Where you traced your fingers
Down my back, and I would shiver,
And need your kiss, to be close,
Still need it, and I'm such a fool.

But I'm your fool, and I'll wait,
But you better fix things for us,
You better win my heart again,
You better tell me that you love me,
And you better kiss me like you did,
Because I'm a fool, and I realize,
That I'd rather you hurt me again,
And again, and again, I'd rather that,
Than to live without you by my side,
If only as a friend, because I love you,
And I know that just can't change.

Comments

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

awesome! i liked this one! 5/5

[rainbowryda]

i really really really liked this one smile

[Echo Ligeia]

Very nice - expressive and sincere. You avoided a great deal of repetition, even though the subject matter make it difficult to do so (as you stated "blah, blah, blah ^.^). But adding more of the figurative language that is unique to poetry would improve this piece, and perhaps do better justice to the emotions presented.