It's a Love Hate thing

• Artist: Osirissassin
• Description: After finding out that the girl I have a crush on, I wrote this poem in frustration. I hope you enjoy it. Please rate well.
• Date: 05/09/2010
• Tags: love hate thing

It is a conquistador of man

Levels have been brought down because of it
Oceans capsized just to experience it
Ventures have been taken to grip it
Eternity can pass before a true one is found

Yet as you read this, have you gotten the message
Ominous as it is, it is the first letter
U should understand
because I love you


It drives man to do terrible things

Heavens beg for mercy;
At its fear
Time will pass
Eternity will not

Yet as you read this, have you gotten the message
Ominous as it is, it is the first letter
U should understand
because I hate you


Years go by and wounds are unhealed
Oceans continue on their path as
U also will as well

Beaches will be calm
Restorations will be made
Oaks will wither
Kills will be made
Eternity passes on

Maturity is the key
Your heart is what I want

Heat will come in the summer
Eternity will pass on
Another love bites the dust
Rightfully gone
Time draws on
can’t you see You Broke My Heart

Comments

[xXRAMS3YXx]

Its Good but you should have something more heart felt in these kind of poems like I wrote one.. here is a line from it, it was about me and my ex breaking up

You promised me you'll be there forever, By my side through blistering winds. You broke my heart, the pain stabbed me deep. Deep with little broken pins. You Promised me that I'll be the only one for you until the end. So why have you moved on, Leaving me just around the bend.

See you have to add a deep feeling into it,

[redrider645]

Daaaaang, you are good!