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My love has been lost now i
know what it costs.laying
on my bed i start to cry all
because of a little lie.
The hearts are broken.
As it rains i think of you
and start to feel the pain.
One day we will be back together,
hopefully forever.As i feel your lips
touch no more it feels like a closed
door.
The warmth of your touch has gone
away maybe it will be back someday.
I see you in the hall my stomach starts
to crawl.
I try to stop the tears from coming
but you came up closer and started
to smile.We shoud try to get away for a while.
As i look into your eyes and you look
into mine.I ask "how are you" and you
sigh "just fine".
I start to feel the fall, and notice
wat the meaning is," It is better to
have loved and lost than to have
never loved at all!
heart heart heart
- by angel of beginning |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/24/2010 |
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- Title: Love has been lost
- Artist: angel of beginning
- Description: This is a poem i wrote it is mainly about love and broken hearts!
- Date: 05/24/2010
- Tags: love been lost
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Evera Thyme - 05/29/2010
- It seems vary school kid ish. I think you could easily make it a lot deeper if you get what I'm saying. Still good other then the kinda cliche ending part about the love and lost saying. Its still good so I'll give ya a 4/5
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- angel of beginning - 05/25/2010
- Plz comment about what u think of the poem! thx ill rate back if u have any submissions
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