Misconceptions

• Artist: Shrouded Nightmares
• Description: A poem dealing with love which is quite a hard thing to go through.
• Date: 06/06/2010
• Tags: misconceptions

Misconceptions

Disturb thy not he called from the tower,
The bells chimed as upon thee next hour
Thee plant wilted for tis a flower
As thee lover called with desire
Bliss comes when thee near
Thee Bring upon shrouded fear
Thou love drives through thy as a spear
…
Thy voice trailed off
Then thy spoke with a tone quite soft,
Unwanted is thou love
Flight thee take as a dove
Transcend to thee heavens above
Be gone with thee for not thy beloved

Comments

[vv7722]

This is really good, but all the "thy's" make it sound a little clustered. I'll still give it 5/5, it flows really nicely