My Darling

• Artist: Unfound Dreams
• Description: I don't really know.....
• Date: 06/19/2010
• Tags: darling

When the oceans splash
to the sand beyong our reach
The people on the other side
must truly wonder
Where it was before them
they make up tales
Of the oceans and sands upon
They tell of loved ones,
Mothers, Fathers, Sons and Daughters
Going beyond their reach
They say

"Hush My darling,
My lovely Darling,
Have no fears,
You will always
Be here."

And then their gone
Over the oceans beyond
They write to their loved ones
Letters of joy,
Letters of sorrow,
and they say

"Oh my Darling,
My lovely Darling,
Have no fears,
I will soon be there,
And don't you miss me dear."

Many years pass
The loved ones do too,
Many tears, many wishes,
But then,
From the oceans beyong
They hear a whisper,
A whisper in the wind,
and it says

"Don't cry My Darling,
My lovely Darling,
Have no fears,
I may no longer be here,
But I am always with you Dear."

Comments

[Unfound Dreams]

i was typing fast and looking at my notebook not the screen. I dont watch the screen as i type

[NebuChi3]

How do you spell the first 'beyond' wrong and the one after that is correct and the last one wrong again?._.
And on the 17th line, it's they're.
But, other than those minor mistakes...I like it. :}