Reaching Out

• Artist: la haine pacifique
• Description: i just wrote this off the top of my head because i needed to think about some things, i thought it was good, so i submitted it.... please rate and comment. criticism and tips are highly welcome ^_^
• Date: 06/24/2010
• Tags: reaching

Everything is so confusing
I need some help
I think I'm gonna die
I'm torn apart inside
My mind says left
But my heart says right
I don't know what to do
I'm a complete wreck
Nothing's going right
I need to take a break
Crying myself to sleep too much
I need help
I'm reaching out
Anybody, somebody
Please pull me back up
Out of this land of pinks and blue
Where everything is wrong and crazy
Where nothing makes sense
This land we call insanity
Please help
I'm torn apart
I'm a wreck
I'm confused and lost
I don't know what to do anymore
I'm about to give up
But I'm still reaching out...
-Britny

Comments

[Melany Kate]

it's pretty good, but i would like it better if it had was a bit more fluid.