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Winter, not summer
I like being cold, not hot
Snow's better than sun
Winter, not summer
Heat slows me down really well
The cold calms me down.
I do not like heat
I'd prefer the great winter
Winter is better
I don't like melting
I would prefer freezing snow
The sun is too harsh
The seasons so far
I like winter, not summer
Playing in the snow
Building a snowman
Summer sand really burns well.
Winter's my favorite season.
Desert heat or snow?
Winter is my best season
Summer is blazing.
Bummed in summer heat
The snow is where it is at
Winter, not summer
- by Mario the Davidic Hero |
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- | Submitted on 07/09/2010 |
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- Title: Winter, not summer
- Artist: Mario the Davidic Hero
- Description: An eight-stanza haiku poem which reflects my favorite season for winter, not so much with summer. Well.... in my opinion, summer is a harsh season for me since winter makes me happy these days. Take a look... (YES, I triple-checked it to make sure they're all haiku)
- Date: 07/09/2010
- Tags: winter summer
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Comments (7 Comments)
- EmmyMurphy - 10/29/2010
- awesome haiku! 5/5
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- emoedw92 - 07/11/2010
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well that is very nice
personally a haiku
is not my way man
they do trouble me
although i am a poet
i do not like them - Report As Spam
- serendipity_mule - 07/11/2010
- nice, this is impressive!
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- PoodiePie - 07/11/2010
- O.O It takes some skill to think in Haiku!
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- The Blonde Sally - 07/10/2010
- great poem! smile
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- SentryDefiant - 07/10/2010
- Couldn't agree with you more...summer is way to harsh. Winter can has it's own severity...however...you can always put more layers on...you can't take your skin off if you get too hot. lol. I enjoyed it a great deal. Good work my friend.
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- XxXSmExXiiXxX - 07/10/2010
- nice !! biggrin D
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