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Cloudy skies cover an empty field. Although I wonder, is it really empty?
With it's silent grass, graceful and unchanging.
What about the creatures beneath the earth.
Perhaps fulfilling unknown dreams.
Why must a silent field strike us as empty.
For it holds beautiful nature within itself.
Can it truly be empty?
- by Taurius Dreams |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/01/2010 |
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- Title: Empty or is it?
- Artist: Taurius Dreams
- Description: something i found in my old journal
- Date: 08/01/2010
- Tags: empty
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Comments (2 Comments)
- zakora1000 - 08/05/2010
- i love u dont need to change it 5/5
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- Altar II - 08/04/2010
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I really like the idea that is being brought out here, but the wording seems a bit...wordy
you use three different questions at the same time, one denying your opening statement
also clouds over, not cover
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