FCK GARDEN TOOLS

• Artist: Zane Gray 305
• Description:
• Date: 10/08/2010
• Tags: garden tools

Live life just talking laying back talking smack
Wake up to reality walkin back like a druggy on crack
Guys wanna be me cuase the women see me
Girls love me I hate me cant esape me
I hate the way i talk the way i walk the s**t ive done
I hate the way fight the way i move the way I think
I just talk and thegirls come they love and fall for me
I hate that 2 these little boys wanna be me cuz they see me with girl after girl
Its impossible they spit game try to look good
walk my walk talk my talk and fight my fight
I hate my life and everything ive been threw
I hate people I hate you i hate suicide
I hate genocide I hate hate
I hate escape I hate water I hate peace and love

....yet I love fighting
I love my anger
My death
My honor
My pride
My loyalty
My flames of anger and angry looks
My fire and darkness and earth
But most of all.......


I LOVE LOVE MY GIRL......so all you other girls sorry but im taken
aint gunna change either

Comments

[BlueFheiry]

wish uuu all the best ^_^

[Zane Gray 305]

i wrote this for my girl my rythme is my own even thought i wasnt trying to have rythem here its not like my other poems but how it makes you feel i thank you and im honored that you feel that way i love to inspire hopelessness and anger....i noe this feeling all to well but the point is to never shut down hope may not be there but as long as u can draw one last breath your still alive and thier anythings possible

[NakedJack]

The tone gives me a hopeless feeling, but also your hostility towards me begs me to anger. Hopeless anger. Then you express what you love, and at this point, I start to see a bigger picture, instead of just your pain of alienation; You tell me of your struggle, merely to boast, you still stand, fight, and enjoy it. Which is hopeful, and makes me think I too should be proud I struggle and still smile. Well done, but still, needs a rhythm to match the style, look into meter, and ellipses.

[Your Local Deity]

im sorry hun......
i love u too