Dear Forgivness

• Artist: insert_name_here_3
• Description: I want to submit a poem to "page one" (a school magizine) Im having a hard time choosing between "Dear Forgivness" "Hopeless and Grey" and "Love Song" each is submitted under my user please vote on which one you think I should submit.
• Date: 12/14/2010
• Tags: dear forgivness

Dear Forgivness,
I need you once more.
Can you hear me?
I've hurt sombody.

No longer singing,
to the full moon.
No longer holding,
the strength of a mansoon.

I cry to the mighty sea,
can you feel the sand?
'Cause you're not here by me.

Why do we leave light on,
when we cannot see.
I want to turn it off,
but not waste energy.
Dear Forgivness.

No longer saying
a sweet "Good-bye"
No longer knowing
love that is shy.

I look at our place.
Can you see it too.
'Cause it's missing a face.

Why do we leave the light on
when we cannot see?
I want to turn it off,
but not waste energy.
Dear Forgivness

If I sung to the moon...
If I held a masoon...
If I said "Good-bye"...
If I knew love as shy...
would you forgive me?

Dear Forgivness
do you remember me?
I need you once more,
I've hurt somebody.

Comments

[Ishunui]

Dear Forginess is well written! Beautiful. Almost made me cry