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Look.
Look at all the pain you've caused me.
Are you happy with yourself?
For all that you've done to me?
Was it fun,
always starting fights?
Was it fun,
making sure I worried every single night?
Was it fun,
lying all the time?
Was it fun,
pretending like evrything was fine?
Ask yourself that,
but don't feel bad.
Because you gave away
the only friend you had.
- by lovealwaysadri |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/01/2011 |
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- Title: Was it fun?
- Artist: lovealwaysadri
- Description: Not that good.. But yeah.. Comment, I need the Critique.
- Date: 05/01/2011
- Tags: wasitfun
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- jePomme - 05/01/2011
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I like it a lot. =D
If you wouldn't mind, could you look at my new poem "I Miss You" please and thank you. - Report As Spam
- lovealwaysadri - 05/01/2011
- Thanks guys.
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- Americhu - 05/01/2011
- Wowzers, I love this. I can relate.
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- Makoto_Dante787 - 05/01/2011
- I like it surprised
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