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When you're away
My heart's off the runway
The clouds break open
And tears fall down from heaven
Flowers don't bloom anymore
Because my heart feels sore
Colors turn into gray
And music refuses to play
The sun isn't shining
My chest is aching
No birds are in the sky
They never said goodbye
Butterflies are dying
And I am crying
Because you're gone
And now I'm all alone
- by pompoennetje |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/29/2011 |
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- Title: My Heart.
- Artist: pompoennetje
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Description:
Short, but pretty obvious.
I tried another style, other words, you know. Not sure about it tho. - Date: 06/29/2011
- Tags: heart
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- pompoennetje - 08/01/2011
- Really? Thank you!
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- star-seeker423 - 07/31/2011
- The rhyme scheme is actually very good and the poem itself is really good. To offer some constructive criticism, if you take the ands out of the beginning of the lines it makes the poem more powerful.
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