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My last tear has fallen;
the new year is here.
People clap,
sing,
cheer,
while I finish my note.
I walk out the door and give my last smile.
It seems I'll be leaving ona high note.
I slowly shut the wooden door and walk away.
"Sayornara."
- by Amaria-chan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/22/2012 |
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- Title: Sayornara
- Artist: Amaria-chan
- Description: Please do enjoy.
- Date: 08/22/2012
- Tags: sayornara
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- Catching24Dreams - 09/16/2012
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This is awesome, I love the rhythm!
But to make the rhythm even better I would change "ona high note" to "ona higher note"
Really great!!!!! Love it =] - Report As Spam
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