Falter

• Artist: Ainslie K
• Description:
• Date: 07/25/2013
• Tags: falter

unfurling
her paper thin wings
to taste the wind
She
Took
Flight. But
like a dented model
crafted by clumsy fists;
her final encore
was a falter and a fall

Comments

[Seltzer Cole]

I like this but I do not like how you spaced "She, Took, Flight" and capitalized it and the word "But" and left the rest of the poem uncapped. Huh?